The profile examples will give you some great ideas, and highlight what you should be avoiding. At the end of each profile my critique picks out the good and bad areas in their online dating profiles.Even if finding a mate who is taller than 6 feet weighs less than 170 pounds, has blue eyes and super sexy only makes you appear cranky and spoiled. This gave me a chance to explore the city and I experienced things like the Marien Square, Olympic Stadium and the Beer Halls.Funny how email negativity is stronger than in-person verbal negativity, so give this a wide berth. I like to plan ahead and consider myself ambitious.Laundry lists are for the Laundromat but not as enticement for dating.The classic apology that never belongs in any profile description contains the infamous words Every one of these phrases begs the question, why bother to go online if you can’t get over the newbie factor? I once attended Munich in Germany to speak at a seminar.So his sense of adventure extends from being at home with a TV dinner to exploring, or why not leave it up to the date to decide. The guy doesn’t seem to have a firm opinion of what he wants here…a big no no with women, he needs to take the lead.Owning your own place counts more of a necessity than an ambition…is he still living with mom, or living in a trailer.
Oh my dream trip has got to be travelling the orient express from Paris to Venice to Budapest, and then relaxing on some remote Greek island – You In? After already having gelled on the phone I, as you open your door and even before our eyes meet, I kiss you, whisk you off your feet into my arms (before you faint), put you over my shoulder and escort you to my Ferrari.My ultimate goal is to move to LA write comedy, but it won’t be easy to leave my family behind because they are my anchor and the paradigm of everything that I aspire to be.I love staying up late – whether it’s to party or just to read a good book – but I almost always sleep in on the weekends.(Note to oneself: Don’t you DARE try this – some fantasies are best left as fantasies).So anyway to wrap this short intro up, my idea of the perfect relationship would be consummate companionship, exceptional generosity and an unrestrained love which will provide the base for a long-term relationship…any questions welcome” The Creator Critique This essay screams out fun with a capital F!